Chapter 3 In general, this chapter is well structured and well written, but contains certain grammatical errors that need to be corrected before the document is presented in final form (see below). Page 42, paragraph 1:   Replace "water resource management schemes" with "water-resource-management schemes" Page 42, paragraph 1:   Delete "carefully designed and". It is redundant. Page 42, paragraph 2:   Replace "water resource control schemes" with "water-resource-control schemes" Page 42, paragraph 2:   Replace "water resource management feature" with "water-resource-management feature" Page 43, section 3.1, bullet 2:   Replace "alternative resource control strategies" with "alternative resource-control strategies" Page 43, section 3.1, paragraph 3, bullet 1:   Replace "water resource reallocation" with "water-resource reallocation" Page 47, Figure 3.4 caption:   Replace "M  SE" with "MSE" Page 50, section 3.3.2, paragraph 3;   Replace "Related to the assessors are MSE filters." with "MSE filters are related to the assessors." Page 50, seciton 3.3.2, paragraph 3:   Replace "from the users perspective" with "from the user's perpective" Page 50, section 3.3.2, paragraph 3:   Replace "(first-in, first-out)" with (first in, first out)" Page 51, section 3.4.1, paragraph 2, bullet 1:   Replace "rulecurves" with "rule curves" Page 51, section 3.4.1, paragraph 2, bullet 2:   Replace "Piecewise linear transfer function" with "Piecewise-linear transfer function" Page 51, section 3.4.1, paragraph 2, bullet 6:   Replace "finite state machine" with "finite-state machine"