Appendix C.4: Determination of aquifer parameters using generated water level disturbances
This paper contains certain grammatical and spelling errors that need to be corrected before the document is presented in final form (see below).
Page 1, title: Replace "PARAMATERS... WATER LEVEL" with "PARAMETERS... WATER-LEVEL" Page 1, Abstract, "Replace "water level disturbance" with "water-level disturbances"
Page 1, Abstract, "Replace "water management system" with "water-management system" Page 1, Abstract, paragraph 2, 2nd sentence: "Which" is awkward here. Reword. Page 1, Abstract, paragraph 2: Replace "noisy or questionable" with "either noisy or questionable" Page 2, Introduction: Replace "management of the hydrology" with "management of the water resource" Page 2, Introduction: Sentence "Any future restoration of natural areas could be accomplished only by..." is overstated. Reword and deemphasize. Suggest "Future restoration of natural areas is best accomplished by ..." Page 2, Introduction: "Replace "base flow" with "baseflow" Page 2, Introduction: Replace "manuscript" with "study" or "paper" Page 2, Introduction, paragraph 2: Awkward wording, "simple" repeated twice. Reword. Do not use "complicated" here. Instead use "complex" Page 3, paragraph 1: Replace "cause and effect relationships" with "cause-and-effect relationships" Page 3, paragraph 2: Several instances such as "under-determined" and "under determined". The correct spelling is "underdetermined" (although this word not in the dictionary; overdetermined is, though; so "underdetermined" appears to be appropriate). Page 4, paragraph 1: Replace "These approaches however require" with "These approaches, however, require" or better yet "However, these approaches require" Page 4, paragraph 2: Replace "Hydrogeology" with "hydrogeology" What beginning? Reword. Prefer "has remained a challenge" Page 4, paragraph 2: Replace "flow meter" "flow-meter" Page 4, paragraph 2: Replace "steady state solutions" with "steady-state solutions" Page 4, paragraph2: Replace "Chin (1991) for example" with "For example, Chin (1991)" Page 4, paragraph 2, last sentence: Replace "steady state assumption" with "steady-state assumption" Page 5, paragraph 1: leakance, replace for leakiness, or leakage (many instances) Page 5, paragraph 2: Replace "south Florida" with "South Florida" (many instances) Page 6, paragraph 1: Replace "targetted" with "targeted" (twice) Page 6, paragraph 2: Replace "High frequency disturbances" with "High-frequency disturbances" Page 6, paragraph 2, Replace "close to th canal" with "close to the canal"
Page 6, paragraph 2: Replace "low frequency disturbances" with "low-frequency disturbances" Page 6, paragraph 2: Replace "far field investigations" with "far-field investigations"
Page 6, paragraph 2: Replace "water level differences" with "water-level differences" (many instances) Page 8, paragraph 1: Replace "inhomogenuity" with "inhomogeneity" Page 9, paragrapg 1: Replace "aquifer properties can be plotted on a map to show the heterogenuity" with "aquifer properties that can be plotted on a map to show the heterogeneity" Page 9, paragraph 3: Replace "1.0 hr" with "1-hr" Page 9, paragraph 3: Do not use italics for units. Page 9, paragraph 3:  : Replace "least square method" with "least-square method" Page 10, paragraph 2: Replace "sediment conductance parameter" with "sediment-conductance parameter" Page 12, paragraph 3: Replace "100 m and 1hr respectively" with "100 m and 1 hr, respectively" Page 12, paragraph 3: Replace "16 hrs" with "16 hr" Page 13, paragraph 2: Replace "Hrs" with "hr" Page 15, paragraph 2: Replace "top 1/3 rd." with "top one-third" Page 15, paragraph 2: Replace "bottom 2/3 rd." with "bottom two-thirds" Page 15, paragraph 2: Replace "Ft" with "Ft." Page 15, paragraph 3: Replace "Tp = 48 Hrs" with "Tp = 48 hr" Page 15, paragraph 3: Replace "48 Hr" with "48-hr" Page 15, paragraph 3: Replace "south Florida" with "South Florida" Page 17, paragraph 3: Replace "T = 4.49ms/s" with "T = 4.49 m3/s" Page 18, paragraph 4: Replace "effificncy" with "efficiency" Page 18, paragraph 4: Replace "single layer" with "single-layer" (several instances) Page 19, paragraph 1: Replace 0.8 days" with "18 d" Page 19, paragraph 2, last sentence: Replace "1 day" with "1 d" Page 19, paragraph 3: Replace "many gages are spatially spread" with "many gages spatially spread" Page 19, paragraph 4: Replace "0.1m2/s" with "0.1 m2/s" Page 20, paragraph 1: Replace "78 day" with "78 d" Page 21, paragraph 3: Replace "Using the test it was able to demonstrate" with "This test was used to demonstrate" Page 21, paragraph 4, sentence 2: Replace "calibation" with "calibration" Table 5: Replace "Ampl based" with "amplitude-based" Table 5: Replace "Storage coeff" with "Storage coefficient" Table 5: Replace "Coeff of leakage (sediment)" with "sediment-leakage coefficient" Table 5: Replace "Coeff of leakage (aquifer)" with "aquifer-leakage coefficient" Table 5: Replace "effi ciency based" with "efficiency-based" Figure 2: Replace "semiperveous" with "semipervious" Figure 4: Replace "sediment conductivity parameter" with "sediment-conductivity parameter" Figure 9: Replace "m^3/s" with "m3/s" (delete ^) |