SFRSM Fact Sheet Review Please correct errors in grammar and spelling. Page 1, paragraph 1:   Replace "regional modeling tool than can handle" with "regional modeling tool to handle" Page 1, paragraph 1:   Replace "complexities of South Florida today and for years to come" with "complexities of South Florida well into the future" Page 1, paragraph 1, bullet 1:   Replace "Primary and certain select Secondary" with "primary and selected secondary" Page 1, paragraph 1, bullet 3:   Replace "Flexible mesh" with "A flexible mesh" Page 1, paragraph 1, bullet 3:   Replace "natural area like the Everglades" "natural areas such as the Everglades" Page 1, paragraph 1, bullet 4:   Replace "SFWMD providing modeling flexibility in scenario investigation" with "SFWMD, providing modeling flexibility in scenario investigations." Page 1, paragraph 2:   Replace "covering the major portion of South Florida" with either "covering a major portion of South Florida" or "covering the majority of South Florida" Page 1, paragraph 2:   Replace "regional level operational functionality" with "regional-level operational functionality" Page 1, paragraph 2:   Replace "screening level analysis" with "screening-level analysis" Page 1, Section This implementation is expected to: Bullet 2:   Replace "current best available tool" with "current available tool" Bullet 3:   Replace "individuals and consultants" with "professional practitioners" Bullet 3:   Replace "run the model" with "interact with the model" Page 1, Section What are the main components of SFRSM? Paragraph 2:   Replace "Tasks include: " with "Tasks include" Paragraph 2:   Replace "collection of necessary data" with "data collection" Paragraph 2:   Delete "pseudo cells" (Not necessary at this information level) Paragraph 3:  : Replace "control algorithm selections available to the modeler" with "available control-algorithm selections" Paragraph 3:   Replace "dictated by the imposed operational policies" with "dictated by imposed operational policies" Page 2:   Replace title with "Model features" or "Model features and capabilities" or "Model capabilities and limitations". Do not use "Assumptions". Page 2, item 2:   Replace "less than 30,000" with "approximately 30,000" Page 2, item 4:   Replace "if needed" with "if necessary" Page 2, item 4:   Replace "project scale" with "project-scale" Page 2, item 6:   Replace "time-steps" with "time steps" Page 2, item 6;   Replace "flood impact" with "flood hydrology" Page 2, item 7:   Replace "some secondary canals" with "selected secondary canals" Page 2, item 8:   Replace "flow-barriers" with "flow barriers" Page 2, item 9:   Replace "single layer" with "single-layer" Page 2, item 9:   Replace "simulate the surficial aquifer only" with "only simulate the surficial aquifer" Page 2, item 12:   Replace "climactic" with "climatic" Page 2, item 15:   Replace "English units" with "U.S. customary units" [SI units have been used in the papers. Is there a conflict here? Or, are both systems being used?] Page 2, item 16:   Replace "where possible" with "whenever possible" Page 2, item 16:   Replace "higher resolution (e.g., topography)" with "higher spatial resolution". General comment on the content of Page 2:   Suggest collecting all positives at the beginning, and all negatives at the end. Emphasize positives and deemphasize negatives. Eliminate forced hyphenation on right margins to improve readability (Example "Manage-ment"). This comment applies also to Page 1 (Example: "Simula- tion")